Trash Transitional Phrases

June 26th, 2009

Do you overuse transitional phrases? I do did.

As a website copywriter, I limit transitional words and phrases from any online copy I write or edit. In other words, I don’t overuse “in other words” or “moreover” to strengthen a good point.

Unlike proven offline techniques of sales copywriting, adding transitional words and phrases doesn’t necessarily yield stronger connections with online visitors. Your Web 2.0 target wants information that’s clean, precise and digestible. Longwinded lines may harm conversion rates.

Phrases like “for example” and “in addition to” flow nicely, but do you need them? Are some transitional phrases clouding your messages? Want to find out? Remove them and test.

Let me know how well your new page performs.

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Content Theming for Website Success

May 9th, 2009

Picking the right keywords for your site is straightforward, but how well you present key terms presents a challenge. Your visitors don’t want to see lumps of competing terms on your home page. Neither does Google. Content theming is the answer. 

Content theming is the creation of a series of pages focused on one key phrase. This improve usability and enhance keyword value. This can help attract a specific target audience. It pleases web crawlers. Done smartly, it can even boost page rank. 

Here’s how it is done. First, determine an ideal navigation item for each key phrase. Introducing a product to a new audience? Build a button for Key Phrase 101. When visitors click that button, they access a cluster of pages sporting one key phrase. 

To boost your user experience and search rank using content theming, let’s talk.

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Tweet Your Way to Better Writing

May 8th, 2009

I’m a writer who digs microblogging. Whether it’s a tweet or a Facebook status update, I use this 140-character opportunity to maximize my social messages.

When crafting a tweet or an update—just like when writing an online banner ad or a landing page—my goal is to voice it with clarity and precision. I ask myself, “Is it easy to follow?” and “Will anyone actually want to read it?” My rule of thumb? Write. Read. Revise. Rethink. Revise again. Then post. 

I recently initiated a little game to test my ability to write down to the last letter allowed. During that time, all my Twitter posts were 140 characters. Twitter became my copywriting coach. It was a challenge that helped me tackle my next assignment, writing reviews at 675 to 685 characters each. 

In her Copyblogger post, “write woman for the job” Jennifer Blanchard discusses how Twitter makes her a better writer. How has Twitter influenced your words?

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